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DSE后考生申请英校如何准备文书?

  文书,即是Personal Statement,是申请英校的成功关键。特别厉害的学校特别看重文书,尤其是英国G5。如果文书写不好,那么录取机会大降。
  那么,DSE后考生申请到牛剑G5的文书是怎样写的?今天亿米君来给你们几个例子,告诉你文书的最佳写法!
  例子一:批判的经济系申请人
  I have recently began reading economic literature,it seems as if the more I read the more enthralling Economics becomes.A novel I have read recently,“Freakonomics"by Steven Levitt,Stephen Dubner,is about the versatility of data,how data can be used to solve complex problems and how data can provoke insightful questions.
  I remember one night thinking how some lawyers earn a lot of money while others have an average salary,instantly a torrent of ideas washed over me,I realised that this discrepancy in wages is proof that the criminal justice system is unfair and biased towards those who can afford a superior lawyer.
  So much data could be collected and collated,so many interesting questions could arrive from this study such as do people who are wealthier behave more ethically than those less well off.
  这篇文书每一个论点都要有证据,不能光说不做,所以这位同学说自己看完一本书,再利用这本书提供的线索,说明自己有什么启发,继而使他对经济学感到更有趣。

  例子二:博学的历史系申请人
  Being essentially a study of humanity,I believe history cannot be fully appreciated without developing a certain sense of empathy for the people living and recording the events of their time.
  This has influenced my choice of wider reading–for example,in studying Russia’s tumultuous past century of revolution and violence,Orlando Figes’“A People’s Tragedy”has encouraged me to look beyond the basic conflicts of politics and ideology,and to analyze history from the wider public perspective.
  John Keegan’s“The Face of Battle”also employed this social approach by searching beyond the tactics and methods of military history to explore the human motive and experience behind the phenomenon of war itself.
  这篇文书中,这位同学最强的地方不在于说自己看了多少本书,而是他有一个连贯的主旨,再在这主旨下发掘不同书籍,继而深化自己对历史学的理解。

  例子三:课外活动突出的申请人
  Earlier this year,I sailed around the Caribbean on a Tall Ship.
  Despite having no previous sailing experience,I found working on a ship with young people from all over the country invigorating and I was able to validate my leadership skills.
  I am also volunteering as a psychology assistant at my high school,organising lesson plans for current A-level students.
  In my spare time,I enjoy playing both the piano and the violin,as well as being a keen reader of classic literature.

  文书中除了学术兴趣以外,同学也可以讲关于自己的课外活动。这位同学说的是自己开帆船出海的经验、一些在学校裡当助手及对音乐、文学的喜好。

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